Carrion's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shaman]

This really need to be frontpaged. I love everything about it, the perspective, the expressive strokes, and for the most part, the character. Im currently working on trying to paint and if i can someday make something this cool in the amount of time you did, i'd be a happy person. 5/5

xcrosspictures responds:

Thanks man, glad you like it! Though one of my pictures actually got featured quite recently on the front page and I don't think they would like to feature the same person too often. Don't worry, practice makes perfect. Just train daily and study your surroundings, other artwork and try to make sense of how they did certain things. I can also suggest this tutorial if you're interested in learning a similar technique to mine: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hi_3HymnpXE
Cheers!

[Dissolving Memories]

This Sucks!!!

Great job man
I love that odd lighting, reminds me of twilight princess/dark souls.
Keep on pumping out these rad arts.

Rhunyc responds:

Thanks yo! I'm gonna try. :3

[The Heart]

you always make interesting stuff

nice vector work, i love seeing what people can bring to the table with this style.

[Horizon]

This is great, but...

I think your style needs some refining. Nothing entirely new just some cleaning up and stuff. I know you struggle with digital art just as much i do, its awkward on for some folk. One thing is the lines, they are a bit choppy and tasteless, i think you can add a little more and a little less here and there. Then the coloring, which i know is the digital majority of the image. It lacks atmosphere, nothing is really drawing all the air of the image to make it feel like its breathing. And lastly, detail is missing in some places it should be. Like the bottom of the support beams for the tracks and minor details in places like the bark of the wood that could have gave it some depth. All in all i like the picture though, i just feel it was a bit rushed even though you chopped away at it for so long which may be the entire issue. But i know your experimenting and that takes some steps like these.

Luxembourg responds:

Yeah, I agree with everything you said. All in all, this piece kind of blows and I really just wanted to be done with it after a certain point. My computer was suffering from lots of power problems and I lost a lot of progress at various points with the painting and I had to keep repainting certain parts and eventually it just made me miserable. I should have spent more time on it, but I just needed to finish it.
Thanks for the feedback, Tre. I'm having a really hard time lately figuring out what to do with my work, stylistically and atmospherically and it's really hurting my art. I'm sorry for taking so long to respond.

[Peace Bro]

Good stuff

I wish i could pixelate like that.
Its really nice to see theres another person who still does pixel art on newgrounds =]

[Dead of Winter]

looks like fucking shit

Great line work buddy, its pretty simple but that might be what will make this a winner.
I do think it wouldn't hurt giving the background some love like clouds, starts, or house silhouettes or some shit.

[Blue Sky Noise]

pretty awesome

Esao Andrews is a fucking master.
This is pretty good the shape and color is nice but i think you should invest into a better method of getting your drawings to us, like a scanner, better camera etc.
That way you can also boost colors and clean up the surrounding space on paper.
Also, Blue Sky Noise is a perfect album, i can get from the first track to the last without even knowing any time went by at all.

AmBearLynnUnknown responds:

I need a scanner but I don't have that kind of money, sadly..

[Adrienne]

okay

i can embrace your stuff having warmer colors.....
*sniff

Rhunyc responds:

*pats ya on the back* Sorry! Just tryin to improve maselfs. :<

Thanks for the 10 tho ;D

[Leather horns]

i wish you were a woman

so i could make sweet love to you.
AMAZING pic and concept. That is going in the game for sure.
thank you koroboy.